EDITED BY LISA PATTI
Image: "Better than Ever" (detail), Nicholas H. Ruth, 2017
TEACHING WITH WRITING ABOUT SCREEN MEDIA
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34. Confessions of an academic blogger
Henry Jenkins
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37. Review, edit, repeat: Writing and editing book reviews
Alice Leppert
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39. The sharp, short, sweet art of blurb writing
Leah Shafer
40. Bridging the gaps between scholarly essays and mass-market film writing
Nick Davis
41. Writing across the page without a line
Holly Willis
Writing style
In her book Stylish Academic Writing, Helen Sword argues that “stylish academic writers achieve abstract ends such as engagement, pleasure, and elegance not through mystical displays of brilliance and eloquence [. . .] but by deploying some very concrete, specific, and transferable techniques” (8). Sword urges writers to follow the lead of stylish writers by using “first-person anecdotes,” “numerous examples,” and “visual illustrations,” among other techniques (8). Each chapter in Part II models stylish writing, but several chapters directly discuss writing style. Henry Jenkins focuses on the best writing style to adopt for blogs, and Leah Shafer presents the 4 Cs of writing an engaging blurb. Nick Davis reflects on the differences between writing for scholarly and popular publications. Jenkins, Shafer, and Davis consider the issue of writing style in relation to length as does Alice Leppert in her discussion of the challenges of writing book reviews. Finally, Holly Willis explores “creative critical writing” and the importance of focusing on questions of form and style in our writing across formats and platforms rather than focusing only on the critical arguments we present.
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Most of the chapters in Writing About Screen Media pair well with multiple units, so instructors may choose to reassign chapters over the course of the semester or to select one or a few chapters to assign for each unit rather than the entire set.
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COURSE ACTIVITIES
The chapters in Part I of Writing About Screen Media include "In Practice" exercises that instructors may pair not only with their respective chapters but also with chapters in Part II. The chapters in Part II also include within each chapter suggestions for applying the ideas and strategies the writers introduce.
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SAMPLE SYLLABUS: WRITING ABOUT MEDIA
Professor Monika Mehta (Department of English, University of Binghamton, State University of New York) teaches a course called "Writing About Media." One of the contributors to Writing About Screen Media, she has generously published an abbreviated version of her syllabus for the course here. Please note that the syllabus cites the first edition of Writing About Screen Media. All of the chapters from the first edition also appear in the second edition.
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WRITING ABOUT MEDIA
Professor: Monika Mehta, Binghamton University, State University of New York
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COURSE DESCRIPTION
This course introduces students to critical frameworks and formats for writing about media. Students learn how to attend to and analyze formal and structural features (e.g., photography, editing, sound) of diverse media forms such as film, television, trailers, music videos, to name a few. In addition to learning about formal and structural features of media forms, the course familiarizes students with analytical lenses such as transnational, race, or gender for examining media objects. The course gives students an opportunity to experiment with and explore a variety of writing formats.
STUDENT LEARNING OUTCOMES
By the end of this course, students will:
1. Develop familiarity with theoretical frameworks for studying media.
2. Analyze clips attending to formal features such as editing, camera-work, sound, lighting, and props.
3. Learn how to write in different formats such as blurbs, scholarly essays etc.
4. Learn how to analyze various media objects such as film, music videos, websites etc.
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This course satisfies the following General Education requirements which are reflected in the student learning outcomes:
H - Humanities
T - Critical Thinking
C – Composition
CONTACT HOURS
This course is a 4-credit course, which means that in addition to the scheduled lectures/discussions, students are expected to do at least 9.5 hours of course-related work each week during the semester. This includes completing assigned readings, viewing media texts, preparing assignments, doing library and online research, and other tasks that must be completed to earn credit in this course
PREREQUISITES
None
ASSIGNMENTS
Short Assignments
We will be doing short writing assignments in this course. Regular prompts for these assignments will be given during the semester.
Long Assignments
You will do three long assignments for this course. Information about these assignments will be provided later in the course.
Media Viewing
You are expected to view all media texts. These texts can be accessed online on platforms such as YouTube, Netflix, Amazon, Hulu, Eros Entertainment etc. Please take notes while you are viewing media texts. Note-taking will help you in analyzing media texts and help you in contributing to class discussion. You will be expected to answer short class queries; to participate in class discussions; and to complete sequence analyses related to these texts. This viewing impacts both your assignment and participation grades.
Participation
Your participation is vital for the class and will impact your grade. I strongly encourage you to attend class on time and actively listen to the lectures, your peers and contribute to class discussion as well as collaborative work.
COURSE MATERIALS
Books
Michael Kackman and Mary Celeste Kearney, eds., The Craft of Criticism, (New York & London: Routledge, 2018).
Lisa Patti, Writing About Screen Media, ed., (New York & London: Routledge, 2019).
Media Texts
Available on online platforms.
Supplies
Please bring a 3-ring spiral notebook or loose-leaf paper as well as pen or pencil to class. You will use these to take notes and to do class assignments. I will collect in-class assignments.
COURSE SCHEDLE
(Note: All readings and film viewings should be completed before the scheduled class session. Please bring the readings to the class session)
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I. WRITING & STYLE
Day 1
Introduction to class
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Day 2
Holly Willis, “Writing Across the Page Without a Line,” in Writing About Screen Media (WASM)
Lisa Patti, “The big picture: Strategies for writing about screen media” in WASM
VIEW: Farah Khan, Om Shanti Om (2007) Trailer
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Day 3
Nick Davis, “Bridging the gaps between scholarly essays and mass-market film writing,” in WASM
READ/VIEW: Reviews of Om Shanti Om
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Day 4
Leah Shafer, “The short, sweet art of blurb writing” in WASM
READ: Blurbs on Om Shanti Om
II. FORMAL ANALYSIS
Day 1
Philip Lutgendorf, Om Shanti Om, https://indiancinema.sites.uiowa.edu/om-shanti-om
Suzanne Leonard and Diane Negra, “Stardom and Celebrity” in TCOC
VIEW: Farah Khan, Om Shanti Om (2007). Available on Netflix and other online venues.
Day 2
Jeremy G. Butler, “Visual Style” in TCOC
Jason Mittell, “Narrative” in The Craft of Criticism (TCOC)
In-Class Sequence Analysis workshop
Day 3
Lisa Patti, “From screen aesthetics to site design: Analyzing form across screen media” in WASM
Lisa Patti, “Entering the conversation: How and where to develop a critical argument” in WASM
Day 4
Nilanjana Bhattacharjya, “How sound helps tell a story: Sound, music, and narrative in Vishal Bhardwaj’s Omkara” in WASM
VIEW: Song Sequences, Romantic Hindi Songs Playlist, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xn6VafZBRrc&list=PLKSISaHkwMdNejxDQHS0Lrt8J-BdEh9qr
Day 5
Carol Vernallis, “Writing about music video: Tracing the ephemeral” in WASM
S. Hejin Lee, “Writing across divides: Locating power in K-pop music videos” in WASM
VIEW: Music Videos, K-pop Playlist, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMMp-09BHa0&list=PLKSISaHkwMdO1BLmNcb31mfpeilIN21oK
III. TRANS/NATIONAL MEDIA & REPRESENTATION
Day 1
Mandatory Writing Workshop. Rough Draft of Sequence Analysis Due.
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Day 2
Shanti Kumar, “National/Transnational/Global” in TCOC
Gavin Mueller, “This is Everywhere, ”https://popula.com/2018/07/29/this-is-everywhere/
VIEW: Childish Gambino, This Is America Music Video and Its Remakes Playlist, https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLKSISaHkwMdN2h5EiCCsqjxIZTYCvodzE
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Day 3
Final Draft of Sequence Analysis Due
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Day 4
Olivia Khoo, “Writing About Transnational Cinema” in WASM
VIEW: Everything Everywhere All at Once (2022), Directed by Daniel Kwan and Daniel Scheinert.
(Available on Kanopy via Binghamton Library Website)
Day 5
Mary Beltran, “Representation” in TCOC
Fan Yang, “Writing about transnational media: From representation to materiality” in WASM
Day 6
Jeffrey Middents, “The research and the remix: Video essays as creative criticism in WASM
Tijana Mamula, “The need for translation: Difference, footnotes, hyperlinks” in WASM
VIEW: video essays on Everything Everywhere All at Once (2022)
IV. EXHIBITION & ETHNOGRAPHY
Day 1
Kristin Stevens, “Writing about film festivals as events” in WASM
Ramon Lobato, “Writing about streaming portals: The drama of distribution” in WASM
Day 2
Mandatory Writing Workshop. Draft of Music Video Essay Due.
Day 3
Jessa Lingel and Mary L. Gray, “Ethnography” in TCOC
Matt Hill, “Audiences” in TCOC
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Day 4
Final Draft of Music Video Essay Due
Day 5
Jasmine Nadua Trice, “Writing outside the text: A cultural approach to exhibition and moviegoing” in WASM
Tejaswini Ganti, “The value of surprise: Ethnography of media industries” in WASM
Day 6
Video Essay Workshop
Day 7
Alice Kozma, “Listen up!: Interviewing as method” in WASM
Lauren Berliner, “When it all clicks: Writing about participatory media” in WASM
Julie Wilson and Emily Chivers Yochim, “Feeling out social media” in WASM
V. Authorship and Paratexts
Day 1
Cynthia Chris, “Authorship and Auteurism” in TCOC
Jonathan Gray, “Intertexts and Paratexts” in TCOC
Day 2
Monika Mehta, “Analyzing and writing about credit sequences” in WASM
VIEW: Pariah (2011) directed by Dee Rees
Day 3
Draft of Video Essay Due
Day 4
Lauren McLeod Cramer, “A Very Black Project”: A method for digital visual culture” in WASM
Jasmine Mitchell, “Expressing race in Brazilian telenovelas” in WASM
VIEW: Instagram Reels (TBA); When They See Us (2019), directed by Ava DuVernay (Episodes 1 and 2)
VI: Media Industries
Day 1
Bill Kirkpatrick, “Media Policy” in TCOC
Bronwyn Coate and Deb Verhoeven, “Show me the data!: Uncovering the evidence in screen media industry research” in WASM
Day 2
Timothy Havens, “Production” in TCOC
Derek Johnson, “Researching and writing across media industries” in WASM
VIEW: Nollywood: Film Business African Style (2020), directed by Johannes Preuss
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